Descriptive writing using the five senses
Describe a setting using more than one sense, choosing words that name what a body can actually see, hear, smell, taste or touch rather than opinions about it.
Board title: Describing with the senses · Say it: “By the end of today you'll be able to describe a place using more than your eyes — what you hear, smell, taste and feel as well.”
senses · sight · sound · smell · taste · touch · describe · setting
Opinions dressed up as senses. It looked lovely. It felt amazing. The verb is a sense verb, so it sounds right, but nothing is actually being sensed. Ask: which part of your body noticed that? If the answer is none, it is an opinion.
Taste only counts if you eat something. You can taste the air — smoke, salt, rain. Worth saying out loud, because it doubles the taste sentences available to them.
Sight does all the work. Left alone, most children write five sight sentences. It is not laziness, it is what writing usually rewards. Make them label the sense before the sentence, and the balance fixes itself.
More senses always means better. Five sentences forced into one paragraph reads like a list. Two or three senses, chosen well, beat all five crammed in. Say this at the end, not the start.
Same four tasks on every sheet, in the same order, with the same look. Only the demand changes. Print the one each child needs; nobody does two.
Same four tasks as every other sheet, same order, same look, the demand is lower, not the dignity. Shorter passage in Task 2, and in Task 3 a word bank or words to tick, with printed sentence starters. Give it to anyone who needs a way in, and expect them to move up.
The core sheet. Give this to most of the class. No word bank; in Task 3 pupils choose from a few close options, then use one in a sentence of their own.
Same four tasks, more demand, a longer passage with a subtler error, and Task 3 asks for two things at once. Not extra work; harder work. Nobody should be doing Spicy and the Medium sheet.
Lesson code SENSE at playspaghetti.com. The code is printed on the bottom of every pupil sheet with a QR, and Class Quiz in your dashboard opens the plenary quiz for this lesson pre-picked.